[Konvas] I need Comment on a musical clip i did for free to a new artist ...

[Speedbirdmgh at aol.com]

PS,
 
Interesting video and a nice tune based on a 1960's theme. Also cutaway's  
and fades are inline with the pace of the music and the astronauts are a  
nice distraction which is the best part of the video!
 
"If I was the director" I would have taken side/back shots and profiles to  
give it some shape as the frontal shots got a bit tedious for me. Overall I 
 enjoyed it but the most annoying thing for me was the view of the tent and 
stage  scaffolding which was not very attractive and spoilt the clever 
astronaut  sequence of shots. Also the sound did not sync that well with the 
"Jade's"  finger actions and guitar strumming. Although, I think that there 
were only 4  cords there so may have been difficult.
 
Pretty girl, obviously 'in love' with her man needs a more romantic setting 
 to give the song more of an impact.
 
This is only my view and not a criticism of your DP skills.
 
I enjoyed it. Rita
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