[Konvas] I need Comment on a musical clip i did for free to a new artist ...

[Adam Frey]

Pierre,
As you probably knew, the entire United Sates was on vacation this past 
weekend (July 4th weekend), but we should all be back to work today. So 
I was just able to view it.

Since I unfortunately don't speak French, I had no clue what she was 
singing about. But, like Rita, I liked the space shots.

I think it's because I couldn't understand what she was saying, which 
likely effected everything about the shots, but I felt like the space 
and love theme could have been "tighter" (for lack of a better 
description). But since you didn't have a budget for this project, I'm 
pretty sure that's why you did it the way you did.

To help viewers "get" the love theme a little more, you could always 
insert a closeup of her reading a kind of "I miss you" type letter from 
him and/or vice-versa (along with a few tears) or something along those 
lines. A few closeups of her and the astronaut would have been good to 
have as well - but we all understand a "no budget" shoot! ;-)

BTW: You must have had a very long arm to hit the record button to get 
the shot of you and your wife were on the beach! haha!


Cheers,

Adam Frey
Director/Cinematographer
Crimson Chain Productions
http://crimsonchainproductions.com
Cell: 301-639-7146

Crimson Chain Productions
PO Box 35
Libertytown, MD 21762